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Monday, April 8, 2019

Cyber bullying

Last week Me, Harry, Taylor, and Isaac drew a story at art class. The characters in the the story are Harry, Pei, Mob. The story was about Cyber bullying here is ours.
And here is our feedback:
  • I liked how you described it step by step, 
  • I once or multiple times got scammed by people last year but i found out that it was one of my friends 
  • What i think you can improve is to describe move clearly and what is happening  in the picture 
  • Other than that everything is ok great job.

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