Cyber bullying

Last week Me, Harry, Taylor, and Isaac drew a story at art class. The characters in the the story are Harry, Pei, Mob. The story was about Cyber bullying here is ours.

And here is our feedback:

• I liked how you described it step by step, 
• I once or multiple times got scammed by people last year but i found out that it was one of my friends 
• What i think you can improve is to describe move clearly and what is happening  in the picture 
• Other than that everything is ok great job.