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Friday, September 22, 2017

Partly Cloudy story



W.A.L.T:

  • Create a description of the scene using similes and metaphors.
  • Write in correct sentences.
  • Use paragraphs correctly
  • Use adjectives
  • Begin sentences with different/ interesting sentence starters.

I'm a storyteller.  It was one sweaty hot summer afternoon and it was about 4 or 5 pm, the sun started to go down in New Zealand. There were storks that looked happy in peace but the clouds ,oooooh, very cool, they were full of colors.  The clouds were making cats and dogs were getting made babies were getting made. But there was one cloud that caught my eye the cloud was like a storm but the cloud seemed happy he made an alligator the alligator opened its mouth and closed its mouth on the stork the stork was scared but still took the gator there were other animals to but they were happy but they didn’t be nice to the storks but there was one animal what the stork didn't take the animal then the dark cloud got angry but one of the storks put a NFL costume on and picked up another animal and were happy.

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